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Soulful Solitude

Beauty surrounds her
Yet she is alone
in the garden of her soul

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Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

A contest entry

Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    I tink this should of won gold...Beauty can exist in ones soul even if they feel alone.

    return the favor?


  • HeartTangles
    November 18, 2008
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    This should have been the golden winner in my opinion. Perfectly worded.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    I love this! The garden of her soul ... perfect


    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Love the flow and word choice...sad when we feel so lonely that we never find comfort in ourselves...very beautiful and strong in brevity.
    Best to you!


    • buffsab99
      November 10, 2008
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      Thank You

      This picture spoke very loudly to me and had its own story. Thank you again

  • iroquois silver member
    November 1, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Outstanding choice of words to highlight the response to the picture. Thoughts to ponder.


    • buffsab99
      November 3, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, 13 words is so very hard to do


  • Leonura
    November 1, 2008
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    Simple words with such heart and sorrow. truly may she find peace in that garden.

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