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shield of light

shield of ephemeral light
i let surround me.
my brief guardian
in despair.

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Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

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  • poet of justice
    November 26, 2008

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    :)

    what can i say


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Fabulous word choice with thought provoking imagery
    Stunning write!

    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • dreamersalwayslive
    November 2, 2008

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    Awesome!
    The only thing I would change is the 'i' to I. But otherwise, you tell a story in such short words, great job!

    • TOEchikira
      November 3, 2008
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      lol thank u!! i was never i fan of capital letters... =D


  • hks
    November 1, 2008
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    ephemeral is an awesoem word

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