Innocent chldren
Can be struck by Cupid's arrows
and
Babies show a different love for Mom.
Caring is touching ones heart
With friendship and belief.
A childs love is like chains.
Innocent at first
but
It never leaves.
Its like a flowering rose
Nourished by caring and watering.
So apreciate its different phases
but
Remember its not just for adults.
Love is for everyone
Despite their age. color or race.
dragonheart1
Author notes
Credit: art of Susan Rios
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Options by piccola.
900 points, ended November 4, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great poem,
But I think that young people; in their teens, will jump head first into the water before they wade out to see how deep it is. I do agree that love is blind to race, and also same sex, but marriage is a life long choice, so I don't see any reason to rush into it without alot of thought. Good luck in the contest.
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good job, it really is hard to say just what love is. a special feeling for someone else, but who is to say what makes it special, or how old you have to be........ok maybe 15 and 17 are too young to marry, but who has the right to say their love is not real, or will not last. Maybe it would last longer than any other in their lives.
love how you portray it
Rhonda
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