Be my shooting star,
One that shimmers
When my clouds turn grey
Be the silence,
In my haphazard world
Be my inspiration,
When my muse runs away
And refuses to return
Be my Romeo
And take me as your Juliet
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Take me with you
The next time you decide
To escape from reality
Carry me with you
On your magic carpet
And open my eyes
To a whole new world
Take my fragile heart
And place it next to yours
So they could beat in synchrony
Take my crushed soul
And hold it dear to yours
As we go on our endless journey
Author notes
Love is a endless journey of the two hearts...Unknown.
A contest entry
- the two hearts... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Touching and Emotional
I wish this feeling your pen and I feel we all experience some day.
This poem is beautifully written.It is jsu a simple note from the heart, full of love and feeling
We are all on this endless jouney ..I agree
Thank you for sharing
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It's beautiful.
I really liked this one. It has great mataphors. It has a calm, loving, and some what sad tone. It is a beautiful poem. Good job. -
This is really very soft in terms of its weaving and its sketching as well..the immages attracts the touches of the love around the words..well done...
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woah, you are good! such a great lovely piece. lovely!!!
hmm- now where is the inspiration from o.0 a little someone (HINT HINT!!) if i really hint you'd kill me
anyways. great piece.
BTW what is up with you and hot pink?!
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