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With shooting stars burning dreams
She stands, draped in silence,
Under the spotlight
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Author notes
Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What an image filled write; the sight of shooting stars destroying dreams just enchants me and then you lock it up beautifully
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Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Beautiful and sad.
Great take on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest. -
i really liked the use of the word "draped" ...beautiful and I liked that the entire poem did not state the complete obvious of something in the picture. therefor, i have pictured the night sky filled with burning stars...and your word choices made the poem beautiful even tho the message you were conveying was not.
I would say you have one of the best so far in the contest...well, in my opinion ...lol. i am no poem expert
Great job...and good luck in the contest.
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Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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Very Deep.
It sound lovely. Do you care to explain this poem? Thanks.
Feel free to take a glimspe of my newest poem entitled: De Wonderful.
Thank You.
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