Come away, come away
And be ye fixed in my heart.
Here now stay, here now stay
Where stars do cross and never part.
A land abounding beyond all dream
Love be kindled, passions flame.
And everything is what it should seem
Pierced in soul by Cupid's aim.
I promise thee love as sunlit day
Only come away, and here now stay.
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A contest entry
- Beautiful Words Softly Spoken. by Poetryintheblood.
625 points, ended November 6, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Reading again your poetry, and find this one friend, very sweet, gentle and your own style and words...Very delightful write!
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This is very nice. I like the repeat words... they fit well with this little poem. It says a lot even though it is not a real long poem. thanks for sharing this with us.
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Thank you for your most beautifully worded entry, Josie
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This is perfect for the contest that you entered. I felt like you were whipsering this directly in to my ear. Such a beautiful job!! I liked the vocabulary you used, it's always out of the ordinary. Makes for a better read.
ing alone,
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Thank You
Well then I have done my job.. I just hope the judge thinks that way. I don't have much experience with short poems.
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Aww this was really beautiful! so loving! You have always been so good at rhyme I envy you
lol. You did such a wonderful job, I really love this! best of luck to you in the contest.
Angel
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What makes this journey all the better is having a friend such as yourself along for the ride. Thank you for everything.
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Beautiful, such longing and love in every line. verra beautiful, and soft.
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I thank ye fer your comment. I don't have much practice with poems so short and so I am trying to fine tune me approach and pack great power in a small punch.
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