Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

almost

you are so close,
yet still so far.
a star in the heavens
you guide the way
and it feels like I could reach out and touch you.
but still there are so many miles between us.
I want to run to you so you could
make everything okay.
I want to hold you
and remember
why the world is always beautiful.

Author notes

Almost there.

How can I improve this?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)