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again on board---------------------

Moon and stars
in the sky
stopped sizzling

smiling flowers
in the garden
ceased spreading fragrance

Where is my beloved?
and her honey dew face?

I am for lorn and ship wrecked
staying at the other end
waiting for a rescue deal

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30-40 words of Brilliance #27

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Sigh, this is beautifully tragic, well formed and well written. Best to you in the contest