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Watching the Waves

Looking at the waves crashing upon the shore
Reminds me of the tears flowing down my face
I tried so hard to find a saving grace
I want so bad to kiss you again
But until then I can only
Hold the memories of you close to keep me warm
On the nights I can’t fall asleep in your arms
It hurts to think that god knows when I’ll see you again
Knowing I can’t even hear your voice
Saying you love me and miss me too
The pain is enough for me to want it to end
To just give up and pretend I don’t care
But I know that without you I can’t live
I’ll never love like this again
Wishing even the sun could keep me warm
But nothing can accomplish what only your love brings
The happiness in my heart can’t be diminished
I want nothing more to wake in your arms
For I cannot sleep without your touch
I lay awake counting seconds as they turn into months

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I love you baby. Im waiting and hoping

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  • Painful Memories
    November 9, 2008
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    It will happen Soon

    that person is me and will always be I love you to Sarah


  • DistilledGin
    November 2, 2008

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    WoW!!!!

    It's great!! Really!! Beautiful!! I love it!! God should be capitalized. Third line from bottom... you may want to consider putting than* in there... other than that... Terrifico!!!!!


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    I loved it

    This was amazing and so sweet great job pen on poet


  • Painwarlock
    November 1, 2008

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    wow great poem who ever that is is very lucky theres alot of emotions and i can relate in detail of missing someone close to me