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Orphan




Strings of the heart,
have become detached,
in life so far apart,
from those who are attached

Soul searches reason,
for answers unknown,
like an act of treason,
this heart was left alone.
































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Prompt: Orphan

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    It is awful knowing some will never get the answer they desperately seek, You have expressed that flawlessly in this piece


    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Such sad thoughts my darling. You have pen the feelings of sadness and the loneliness that a orphan bears.

    Joann


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Beautiful Melancholy...

    Good luck in the contest, mate Peace, Cyn