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Unseen



Sound of a melody,
so sweet upon my ear,
written for my love,
the one I hold so dear.

It dances with the moonlight,
as the stars all lay in still,
as the music fills the heavens,
to cross the universe at will.


































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Prompt: Unseen

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Charming I found myself smiling with this piece as I listened out for the melody


    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    I can hear the soft melody flying across the stars, holding upon the words of an angel that I hold so near.


    Best of luck here my darling.

    Joann