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Been There

Who put you on this spinning wheel?
Everything’s moving it is so surreal

You will place one foot onto the floor
please stop, please stop, you implore

Oh you start to feel a little sick
Where’s the toilet, quick. quick, quick

So now your talking down the big white phone
never again, never again, you will groan

One thing is for sure, this is the worst you will feel all day
You’ve heard before, this hangover cliché 

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  • Yorkshire kevin
    November 2, 2008
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    Thank you for the gold award - I really enjoyed writing it. Hope you feel better than I do today watching England getting hammered at the rugby after thirteen minutes - 12 - 0 down!
    Kevin


  • Meroza
    November 1, 2008

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    haha! "So now your talking down the big white phone" love that line, and the rhyme in it makes it so catchy!
    Thanks a billion for entering this one, I love it!


    • Yorkshire kevin
      November 1, 2008
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      HI
      Thank you for your comments,hope by now the room has stop spinning lol
      KEVIN