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the wrong town






am I still a child
running through unnamed streets
trying to find a safer place to play ~

feet bare
and a heart full of nothing more
than yesterdays reason to live.



my dreams are in a bottle

some place

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Prompt: regrets shore

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    I feel like this a little myself at the moment, like nowhere is where I belong, so this touched me. Best to you in the contest