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Feelings

Count your garden by the flowers.
Never by the leves that fall.
Count your days by the golden hour.
Dont remember clounds at all.
Count your nights by stars and not shadows.
Fill your life with smiles and not tears.
And with joy on every birthday.
Count you age by friends and not years.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 28, 2008

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    ohmygosh.

    this is AWESOME! i really loved this poem. it was so short yet so beautiful. i love the comparisons and how you structured this entier piece. it was a lovely read, and i love the last line! it is so creative and beautiful. keep penning this was a real pleasure to read


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    November 27, 2008

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    Wowzers. Wonderul job lil sis.
    Keep this up.
    Btw,
    Wnna hang tomorrow or something?
    Oh and how do you know my TyTy?(Tyl3r).
    Oh! And will you read some of my new stuff?
    Anywho,
    Loves,
    Your RL big sis,
    Sav Sav


  • Tyl3r
    November 18, 2008
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    Nice poem. We should all focus on the posotive things other than the negative.