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my Lost Love

Since the minute I said NO
I did wander everywhere
Emptied heart, you stole me inside
Peace of mind, I find nowhere
Reciprocated not, I blame my pride
Killing me alive, where did you GO?


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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Such a very sad little piece, you took this somewhere different I am glad of that. Best to you in the contest

  • bigperm gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    wow

    very well written. I'm glad to have come across your page and look foward to reading more of your works :]