Your no Captain Hook playing with people's lives.
Like Alice, falling down rabbit holes never getting
up again because you would probably get stuck,
like the Wolf from Red Riding Hood when he got
axed....
Choking on regrets, underlying greeds.
Author notes
True Story...
....
Not saying much more.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #27 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmmm well this was interesting, seemed a little more like a rant than a constructed poem but good on you for getting it out there. Best to you in the contest

