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A Green Man

Your no Captain Hook playing with people's lives.

Like Alice, falling down rabbit holes never getting
up again because you would probably get stuck,
like the Wolf from Red Riding Hood when he got
axed....

Choking on regrets, underlying greeds.


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True Story...
....
Not saying much more.

A contest entry

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Hmmm well this was interesting, seemed a little more like a rant than a constructed poem but good on you for getting it out there. Best to you in the contest