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it hurts.

black mazda rx8's
the headlights sliced my thoughts open and bred inside
multiplying into every single doubt i ever had
in reference to you and your dark hands
and each "nothing against you at all" manifested itself
as one new personality complex and
another ache in my ribcage
i pretended the universe was made of sand and acted like i could play in it
creating whatever i wanted to work with
but the truth is
it took everything in me not to rip myself to shreds
and try to start over.
i know that's giving up.
and somehow i still know that's wrong
even after you stomped all over everything i thought i was so sure of.

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if you want to know where i'm going, you have to know where i've been.

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    November 2, 2008
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    beautiful.

    its simple yet it has great depth.

    well done!!