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On that hour

as the hour of haunting soon comes to an end
are souls that were once gone, gone again

temptations and desires come  closer to an end
as spells that were once cast go far ahead

once the hour of haunting ends all must come to an end
our spells and potions soon dawn upon the hour
for they slowly come to an end

at the stroke of midnight lastly approaches our spells
finally come to an end
 

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