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you're my mind cage

i wish my fingers still scribbled and scratched against pages until they ached.

usually i think glasses  are half empty,
but this ones filled to the brim with thoughts i cant comprehend
like a language thats beautiful yet strange;
intricate runes too intimidating to translate
a stranger etched under my skin

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  • sgking123
    November 26
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    wow

    liked the brimfull glass which is quite an exception tothe half filled that you do encounter usually....well love simile is so intense here that I did like it quitea bit


  • decode
    April 11
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    oooh. I like it.


  • bird-mad girl
    November 2, 2008

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    eeeeeeeeee I'm so glad that you've posted something! I missed you!!!

    This was gorgeous. It was fiercely lonely and aching. I adore the last two lines, they oozed with beauty.

    I hope you stick around


  • Miss Faith
    November 1, 2008
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    lovely.


  • girl shaman
    November 1, 2008

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    oh i know that feeling all too well.
    its nice to see you around again though hunnie we all missed you <3

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