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Monster

Inside every man is a monster, a beast straight from the pit.

Normally we fight against it, keeping it trapped in it's cage.

But now, I don't want to, I want to set it free and watch the fun.

Does this make me evil, for wishing pain and death on others?

Probably, but I don't give a shit, I'm gonna break the cage wide open,

and my true self will be there for all to see.

 

I'd start running if I were you.

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  • afullmetalwar
    November 15, 2008

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    very true,
    it doesn't mean you are evil.
    you may have the dark power, doesn't make you evil (using a metaphore for a game)


  • Mgreen
    November 6, 2008

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    Very forceful ,raw poem, and everyone has a beast within them, that when down or very angry we would like it to be set.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 31, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    You see... sometimes I think that it makes us human. I mean if you think about the animal kingdom, and the way in which they let loose, that makes us animalistic as opposed to sadistic.

    Just a thought