Vulnerable
Embrace Me
Stay
Author notes
When I read your poem, I really hear you say how vulnerable you are, that you really want this person to stay, to hold on, and never let go. So these are the titles I feel would fit your poem.
A contest entry
- A name for a poem by Starnova.
400 points, ended November 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like the confession and pleading quality evoked. very nice.
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I can see this
You really read between the lines! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker -
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thanks for taking the time to stop by and comment. I appreciate it.
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These titles are quite good and express what the poem says.
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thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate your possitive input.
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The first few lines were great. I loved Vulnerable it is simple enough without saying too much the thought that imediately came to me was survivor. All the best in the contest.
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thank you
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Good ideas.
I think that all of the titles could fit. Very nice. I wish you well. -
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thank you
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well, i'm not really vulnerable, but i have been hurt a lot. you are right about the rest though, about how I want him to stay and never let go. he is in the navy and right now is at sea but i am impatiently waiting for him to come back. thank you for entering and good luck
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powerful
and such few words! amazingly good!
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Powerful
Thank you Swan, The contest was for a Title to the poem the contest holder wrote. Whe I read it, and read, and read again, this is what came to me.
I appreciate your supportive comments. Thanx again my friend!
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