I found a meadow full of yellow daffodils
8 rainbow colored rays and 7 golden keys
aganist the sun rise high above the purple hills
they sparkled like brunished gold through the trees
and the whispering wind was sweet and mild
across my heart, my soul and face
and like the phoenix I arose again- a child
free from needless time and space...
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this has a real sense of soft strength...sometimes it isn't about a huge struggle but the more silent move forward that helps propel us through life...nice write...thanks for sharing...
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wow i really like this.
My favorite part was:
and like the phoenix I arose again- a child
free from needless time and space...
the imagery was very strong, and it gave a sense of hope...
Great Write!
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amazng
very nice and calming -
Your writes always amaze me! Thanks for sharing this inspirational piece here with us! keep it up!
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Wonderful uplifting write... amazing how nature lends itself to awakening, for me it is the beach...
love the gentle rhyme throughout
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Nature's metaphors are splendid and miraculous. Higher dimensions communicate with us in that way often. You understand the language and pass on the message in a most enchanting way. Thank you for sharing, angel.
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deeper meaning then meets the eye,
freedom, when we see through deception
we find the keys each unlocking a ray of color and we are able to see so clearly.
awakening flows swiftly throuh your carefully well chosen words
God bless you Poetess...
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Yes, to arise again
as a child
full of innoscence and unconditional love
applause poetess
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Wow!
I really liked the way this one flowed and the excellent rhythm. Simple, sweet, and perfect. Well Done my Poetess Friend! ~Blessed Be~Happy Samhain~Gar
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Humm..I closely felt the connectivity is taken place between the words and unwords...creating the peace around ...as its impact..wonderful indeed...
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