Take this rose my lover
Remember it’s part of me
Take this rose my lover
When you go to sea
You’ll be gone a long time
But I’ll remember thee
I have read the signs
And you’ll come back to me
I’ll be on the widows walk
For many days at a time
And when you tie up to the dock
I’ll be running to you
Take this rose my lover
Remember it’s part of me
Take this rose my lover
Darling come home to me
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Lovvvvve by fake-or-real-smile.
550 points, ended November 3, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haven't had one of these in a while... by Luckintheshadows.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 29 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Collaborating Partner Wanted by WarmHeartedGeisha.
900 points, ended February 20, 7 entries
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Comments
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Awww how sweet
I really liked this!
Short but sweet
well done, good luck and thanks for entering.
Rebecca
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aww i love this one too! you create really great poetry. i love the theme of this one
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