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Torture and Bliss

Sitting there after school
Your head resting in my lap
I steal a glance at you
And hope nobody notices

You're about to break up
With your girlfriend of two years
It's impossible, but I can't help but think
That you're flirting with me

I've liked you for a while
And never said a thing
My feelings never voiced aloud
I only hope you feel the same

So there we sit
For two hours after school
Torture and bliss
Being so close, yet so far apart

Author notes

I know it's a few lines shorter than you wanted, but I don't think I should add another stanza.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    This is the another view of this love and one can't make it a part of life yet it is..very touching story of this life..thanks for poetry..


  • emc2
    November 4, 2008

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    This is so true with young love. They know what they want, but they just can't voice themselves. They sit back and hope that you feel the same about them and will confront them, so they don't have to confront you. Wonderful job and good luck in the contest!