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You Decide

And what is left in this life?
A thin line of thread to tread upon
Waters of rivers, valleys holding onto what power they have left,
Gravity failing to keep people on the ground.

"Change your thoughts and you change your world"
Is a joke not to be laughed when heard.
This thought process will bring us lower than hell itself,
Into a pit of total desolation on the place we call home.

For it is not the words within ones mind that can steer a nation,
A persons hand, mixed within a sphere infinite with human species,
Must do the work that an unknown force put them here to do:
Work together to form a utopia not in line with its true definition,
But a utopia that also has its faults and mistakes:
For as it is said, no one is perfect.

Author notes

hmm..
i guess just tell me what you think. and whether you agree or disagree. its really a matter of opinion and experience.

Penny for your thoughts please and thank you. :)

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  • Cookie Sasquatch
    October 31, 2008

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    hey loser! umm i totally agree with this. and it is a good write confused me at 1st then i was like oh ya...duh lol....but anyway u need to come to church!!!!!!!!!