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The night sometimes is light from the cars and stares.
Well the sunset is a fun set forever.
And a clown has fowned a sound of a hound.
And a phenomenal cat had sat on a hat that was fat like a mat.



Well a picture book has a picture of the night when it’s light and the clown that has fowned  a sound of a hound and the phenomenal cay that has sat on a hat that is fat like a mat.

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  • Gigglez09
    December 26, 2008
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    love it


  • misshugglebugglez
    November 30, 2008

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    haha! its a fun and funny poem hee hee
    my favorite line was "the sunset is a fun set forever"
    great poem! loved it =)


  • sultan gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    This has potential ...

    Stassie,

    I'd like to read this one together when I get to Lebanon. You'r ideas are great and are worth giving a bit more focus on the technical side (smile).

    Love,
    Sultan


  • lisapoet
    November 26, 2008
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    I liked it. It is like the beginnings of a Dr. Seuss book. Keep writing.