the cold, brisk air
and the pale white snow
bringing people together in the holidays
the frozen ice strong enough to go figure skating
and later to go home for some hot cocoa and the warm home
the red rose and the delicious food
the mistletoes and a great family like mood
playing twister, monopoly, and guess who
jamie and alex fell in love, did you knew?
to cuddle around the fire with the ones you love
crazy christmas shopping before the store closes
everyone singing and caroling
telling everyone merry christmas and spread some joy to the unfortunate
having a good heart
watching christmas specials
and the final touch. . .
waiting for Santa Claus
in the morning
everyone rush like a stampede downstairs to see what they got
some say a skateboard
others say a 24k ring, a new car, $500, roller skates, a knitting kit, etc
for this alone
mi favorito seasones(my favorite season)
Author notes
what is your favorite season? winter
ichigosama. please check out some of my other poetry too. you'll enjoy this one very much.
prompt 3
A contest entry
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Comments
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i like this, but whats with the backround? change it to snow or something!
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First off, I have to tell you that I feel your background is way 'too busy' - I had a hard time reading this.....
I really like the way you have done this - it's almost like someone having a chatty phone conversation with a far-away relative or friend.....passing along all the fun news. Great images, very nicely done.
Thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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i loved the way it brought me into a movie ... like a christmas movie that transcends over into the ultimate christmas and winter season ... thanks so much for your time and talent ...
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