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Ambiguity Arose - after Rose Aylmer Walter Savage LANDOR



Oh, what avails a pretty face
with beauty creams besprinkled,
as Father Time wins every race,
soon age Life’s page has wrinkled.

Where is the flush, the lush embrace,
starred eyes that carefree twinkled ?
Night draws its shutters, leaves no trace
of light, save mem’ries sinkled.

Oh, What avails a pretty face,
and voice divinely tinkled,
if all behind be ugly, base,
with mind both blind and wrinkled ?

.

Some say unique is every case,

eyes amber, periwinkled,

yet all too soon return to base,

AND DNA's ash sprinkled.


Oh, What avails a pretty face,
bright eye sublimely crinkled, 
each must a double lie encase 
life left confirms this inkle !

Author notes

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note: Rose Aylmer 1780_1800 died after a surfeit of pineapples and was buried in India

pic Candle
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Rose Aylmer


Ah, what avails the sceptred race !
Ah, what the form divine !
What every virtue, every grace!
Rose Aylmer, all were thine.

Rose Aylmer, whom these wakeful eyes
May weep, but never see,
A night of memories and signs
I consecrate to thee.



Walter Savage LANDOR 1775_1864

Night of Memories

Rose Aylmer whom these wakeful eyes
May weep, but never see,
A night of memories and of sighs
I consecrate to thee.

Mr Latimer in County Chronicle 1950

Parody Walter Savage LANDOR 1775_1864  Rose Aylmer

Angela Thirkell 1890_1961
http://www.angelathirkellsociety.com
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ambiguity-arose-after-rose-aylmer-walter-savage-landor/



THIRKELL Angela 1890_1961

A Confession

Roundel


I’ve loved but thee, who art but stay !
If told the startling truth must be,
I'llspeak : forget the words, I pray,
"I've loved but thee."

'Twas not on Herrick, but on me
That Julia cast for many a day
Her wondrous spell of witcherie;
And I it was who, wakeful, lay,
And sighed that I should never see
Rose Aylmer: so I cannot say,
I’ve loved but thee.


Parody Julia – Robert Herrick
and
Parody Walter Savage LANDOR 1775_1864 Rose Aylmer


Published 1890 J. G. CUPPLES Co. Boston
Herbert Walcott Bowen 1856_1927


Oh, What Avail ?


Ah, what avail the loaded dice ?
Ah, what the tubs of wine?
What every weakness, every vice ?
Tom Cardan, all were thine.


Aldous Huxley 1894_1963 Barren Leaves
Parody Walter Savage LANDOR 1775_1864 Rose Aylmer

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!!


  • thepoetssoul
    November 8, 2008

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    What a powerful penning you have written here.
    The imagery and rhyme is amazing.
    Thanks for this entry.
    And best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    November 8, 2008

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    As always this is perfect rhythm and meter and perfectly written, you never fail to amaze. C


  • Lily of the Valley
    October 31, 2008

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    Time and wrinkles catch up with us all in the end, whether beauty is on the surface or not. Inner beauty is more important throughout life though time even catches up there too. I don't know so much about the beauty cream but for those of us who are racing towards the latter years of life perhaps a steam iorn and starch might work wonders lol. A lovely poem with great humour and as always an element or three or truth !

  • Perfect Insanity
    October 31, 2008

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    I have just changed my contest to one where no prewritten writes are allowed. "/ Sorry. This is a wonderful poem though. Very vivid, and flows perfectly. Good luck in the rest of your contests.

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