pregnancy isn't for rent
but a baby to buy into...
A contest entry
- Epigrammatically Speaking by Peripatetic.
1500 points, ended November 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
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This is a word of wisdom. The seriousness of the subject is underscored rather than belittled with the metaphorical consideration that life is not a short-term lease even if the initial phase is only 40 weeks long.
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Peripatetic, a p.s... to your applause means'
this morning with the comment, I stand behind my interest in what you said ~ but I guess I was too tired to catch the accoutrement that cuts so to speak (on simplicity) --
fairly I usually don't rate shine of all stars for sun faced applaused symbols lol,
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Peripatetic I appreciate the circuited edge of appraisal
I did talk about this until I wasn't dizzy lol and am glad there's some gentle choreography for you...
preparation can expand preciousness of start, beautifully dutiful one day can be with life that can spring ~
nice challenge,
called Carolyn
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A very thought provoking few words.
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Theoherme I'm glad my trying turns with you
yes, was approaching second attempt for the competition with a laughter that I didn't have to get too logical over...
from intensed need of understanding finished financial fertility per se or finesse of physical lifestyle for such I also want to save up usefully with mind, so those applause symbols still are extraneous image of nurture lol ~
called Carolyn
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