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Love Poem in progress - Hollie [Draft]

I need a way
To tell you
I love you

The time of day?
Which sacred space?
We travel through the fields together

I hold you so tight
So you don't slip
I know you appreciate it

We sit and relax
Same old tree log
Our place only you and me

I need a way
To tell you
I love you

The words slip out
You smile back
Then reply in a childish way

I spend all day with you
Wonder back midnight
I wouldn't have it any other way

I trust you more than anyone
Unmasking my lies
Just for you

Laying in your front room
Just chillin'
Watching friends

I'll do anything
You ask me to do

This is my contract
From me to you

Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback

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