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Deaths Brew

~*~

This sip
from death's cup
is a brew
that my taste buds
tingle for earnestly
to assauge
my long ache

let it burn
as it flows down
my throat
exhaust
each of my
senses

let the flavor
appease
tickle all my
taste buds
till raw 
and
very sore

let it blossom
like a newly opening
rose bud
thorns and all

so temptating
inside
this pink cup
that holds
my death's brew

Sweet concoction
this brew
made
for my demise

~*~

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  • thepoetssoul
    November 8, 2008

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    This is an intense penning you have written.
    The imagery is very powerful.
    Thanks for the entry.
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony