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tree leaves fluttering

tree leaves fluttering
in chilly nocturnal breeze
owl is on the prowl

In a list

A contest entry

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    Love the contrast in this haiku! Also the imagery is superb!


  • Samplette gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    Oh yes...the night is a bit nippy now..I like the picture your words paint. Nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam