Call to me child of love and I will call
Sweet whisper scent of love so true and sweet
Fall upon me like rain as leaves in fall
Beat tender heart, my stubborn doubt do beat
Listen boy child inside, stop and listen
Hear words so true no lost adult will hear
Christen your soul with the love you christen
Near hearts center, let God of Love be near
Hold not ambivalence or ambiguity hold
Release love when it is time to release
Cold heart warmed to love will never be cold
Cease apathy; let your love never cease
Hide love inside your heart where wait will hide
Abide in God; let him in to abide
In a list
A contest entry
- Illusionary Poetry by Amera.
2000 points, ended November 14, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent Write! The form is very inspirational in itself. What may I ask it this particular form. I must try! I must try! I must try! Please I must try! A great message within your words. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in life and the contest.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Oh my, this is simply lovely! One of my favorites from you, breathtaking and artful my friend.
love,
Michelle
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Thank you.
Thank you for the high praise, my friend. Coming from a gifted poet as you, this means much to me. I do think I write better if I force myself to write form poetry. I'm more careful about my words. Thanks. I'm not very good at sonnets, so I really appreciate the encouragement. Bless you, my dear, sweet friend.
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This is a fine curtail sonnet. Love is the single most basic thing, what we all need and desire above all, and yet we need to constantly be reminded of it. Good write
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You are simply amazing! This poem is not only beautiful but you penned it in a perfect Shadow Sonnet. You really know the way to my heart. I am putting this poem in my Shadow Sonnet list so it will be easily found worldwide on Google. This is brilliant! Thank you.
Love,
Amera♥
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excellent~
This is a beautiful sonnet
I have only done one in the whole time I have been a member here..they are hard to do
You did this with a peaceful and loving heart.........
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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