Lying next to you,
Looking face to face.
I can hear your breath,
As our hands caress,
Each other head to toe.
Kissing you real slow.
Holding you so close.
I love you the most.
Our arms wrapped around
the love that we've found.
Our legs intertwine,
I am your's -- you're mine.
Laying in this place,
in a sweet embrace,
may this time and place,
never be unlaced.
A contest entry
- face the wall [quickie PIF] by stasis.
700 points, ended November 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am jealous again.
Wouldn't you be uncomfortable reading poems like this if it were me? Wow! I am broken hearted. I can barely breathe. -
This was an absolutely beautiful poem ryan! it gives me a warm feeling inside and makes me smile. The sense of love and imagery in this is phenomonal. keep up the good work ryan!
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this is abaolutly beautiful!
i love it! good luck in the contest!
Sundry
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Beautiful
Written with such sweet sentiment. I wouldnt change a thing. My favorite lines:
"Laying in this place,
in a sweet embrace,
may this time and place,
never be unlaced."
I wish you all the best in the contest...
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i actually liked this poem. my only critique is that you space. its a little easier to read. otherwise keep up the good work
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