Oh little girl,
that sits in a field so green.
Why thy sit with face so dull?
As thy watch the sun that feeds the day.
(A light for our eyes to see)
Touching the earth with thy hand,
As if feeling the emotions that lye’s within the earth’s core.
Oh little girl what thy wait?
Is it the sunrise or is it the cover of the night?
So still is thee, as thou gaze ahead .
With eyes that speaks of a tale that sits within thy soul.
Do speak, let me hear!
Watching thy hand touch the earth makes me wonder.
Art thou feeling the earth's cry.
That weeps emotions of life that had passed.
Oh hopeful heart!
What thy wait?
Is it a path of flowers and streams?
Or is it a gentle breeze that touches thy inner self,
Or is it the beauty of nature’s essence that uncovers the darkness of the night.
With the stars, and the moon as our candle light.
Oh little pearl,
Let me touch thy face,
And take thy hand in mine.
Feeling a hopeful cry of thy silence,
That sits with you and me.
Let me feel thy beating heart that speaks out through your eyes.
Oh little girl,
Thou silence should be heard.
Through the wind that comes fourth,
and the clouds that awaits up high,
and the thunder that screams out in anger.
Let me in of what thy wait!
Is it a flock of birds that fly freely in the open sky?
Free with nothing to hide.
Oh little angle,
Do tell me, what is thy name?
Your body carries a fire of hope,
That burns through the hours of time.
Giving every hopeful heart,
a life that has never came about.
Little girl, I am thee and thee is me.
We as one sit upon this field, with
our heart that cries of pain.
Feeling our emotions of hope,
that wants to scream out the silence.
That travels through our vain into our beating heart.
Yearning to burst out into the wind,
That shall carry our silence through the endless skies.
The stars shall keep our silence,
as it feeds the night, with our hope.
oh little girl, take my hand.
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Outstanding
This reads like old poetry. I liked it a lot. You have created a poem full of sadness and yet with some very beautiful images that transcend. I liked all the emotion and the gentle flow of this poem. Fantastic to read.
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You have a great sense of style, very vivid and evocative! Great!
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This is a wonderful poem you have written.
I really enjoyed your imagery within.
A clever little penning filled with tons of emotion.
Splendidly done indeed in vivid colour and taste.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Tony -
So sad, so lonesome...hope the embrace of the sun warms your soul and brings a smile to your heart
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very moving
We are all certainly one in terms of pain for even far from closeness and all proximity, when there is one who feels hurt then we all do.
I kind of like the idea of a one sided conversation where the person speaking soon discovers the other in a non-verbal way that they share together. There's so much carried within a stare, even if at first it might seem vacant... so much behind the eyes that sometimes trying to describe it to another who can not feel it without words would be an impossible feat.
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