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I Can't See You

Blurred vision of a perfect silhouette,
  a moment of time passes as it slowly diminish,
as the shadows swallows your existence,
  ans therefore let me realize again that I am alone.

The feeling that I have known you before,
  an extraordinary thing because you're suppose to be a stranger,
blurry, I can't say another word,
  but I know you, yes, perfectly.

How could I be so foolish,
  to break the walls between us,
if ever that it would be broken,
  you would be building another one again.

I am hesitating on let you in,
  but, you assured me of doing so,
and then it's really exasperating when you didn't answer,
and then  just give me nonsense reasons to let you go.

Break the walls, help me,
  I don't like to see you on the other side,
break the walls, let it bare me,
  I know  I wanted too, and that's your cue,
but why hold it up,  when I'm ready?

To wait for more,  how could that be?
  when there's no enough reasons to do it?
I guess I have to see you more clearly,
  rather than the silhouette of yours on my face...

Break the walls,
cause I can't see you...

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You're suppose to be a destroyer, and yet, maybe you never fulfill such tasks when it comes to my walls - standing between the two of us...

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  • sense surreal gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    How could I be so foolish,
    to break the walls between us,
    if ever that it would be broken,
    you would be building another one again.

    amazing thoughts!
    in this, in a relationship
    breaking walls is much harder
    than building one

    this is what I got
    galing!


    Anna Lee