Rounded answers swerve,
enwrapping all with each
touch,
hindering ,
hindering,
slight whispers, unlaced,
swishing smoothly,
soundlessly slump.
Embrace sweet hatred
lips, of venomous grating.
Gracefully walk into subdued
lighting, showing off real
puckered-up bright red,
mouthing unpleasant
hard hitting hurts.
Freely breathing,
freely beating.
Unlashed, unlaced doings.
Author notes
Prompt- unlaced
Less than 70 words.
A contest entry
- face the wall [quickie PIF] by stasis.
700 points, ended November 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like this
and your green background is so awesum :]
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Thanks!! Ahah i do like the colour i must say
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wow! cool! i love ur wording <3
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Thank you m'deary! Wording is not always that great aha.
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lol well here it is amazing
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I liked this! I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck!!
♣ Tegan
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