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Walking to Grandma's

Cook up
peas and Okra.
Rice is nice.
Halfway there sunrise.
Joining you for Lunch.

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"Anywhere is walking distance, if you've got the time."
~Steven Wright

My Name ~ Pblacksaw

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  • Crescitvirtus
    November 3, 2008
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    Very evocative. nb spelling 'okra'.


  • Between My Ears
    November 2, 2008

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    Nice to read such a different quote choice and take on the competition than anything else I've read today. Great write. Great flow. Good luck in the contest.

  • Mickie27
    October 31, 2008

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    The lines fit together perfectly. I liked the part of the "Halfway there sunrise." I think it's wonderful to reflect good times we have.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Sounds good LOL.

  • davidwright silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    Mine had an outhouse and I remember it well. Yours is a very cute poem and comes with memories attached. Good luck in the contest and hapy trails.

    • Pblacksaw
      October 31, 2008
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      Thanks!

      Mine had an outhouse too. and chickens and at certain times of the year a pig being fattened. I miss her every day. Great contests. I loved that quote. It broght back memories for a few poems.
      Have a great day!
      Patsy

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