you say you cant wish
for anything
any longer
because all you do is wait
until the deflation comes
bringing you back to earth
what if i told you i understood
then i wished for you
anyway
In a list
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #26 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an interesting piece, I am trying to work out where this inspiration came from. Well done. Best to you in the contest

