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because stars still fall

you say you cant wish
for anything
any longer

because all you do is wait
until the deflation comes
bringing you back to earth

what if i told you i understood
then i wished for you
anyway

In a list

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is an interesting piece, I am trying to work out where this inspiration came from. Well done. Best to you in the contest