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Betrayed

All the promises you made are fading away.
I think ive lost myself,
Your tourment drove me insane.
I feel betrayed..
you have hurt me with all the things you say.
Make me forget,
All the things you done today.
If you leave again,
I will only fall further away.
I called you my friend!!
Loved you,helped you through the pain!
Dont come back to me again!
I cant dont want to feel the same....
You hate me,
Ive had enough!
We can never be the same....
Ive had  enough of the lies,
Enough of the being mad over something stupid......
I would take you back,
But your promise that you would be there forever,
Faded.....And is almost dead.


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  • Very beautiful.. It shows alot of personal feelings,and thats something i respect.. Great job,keep up the good work.


  • Greenemo
    November 5, 2008
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    : ( sounds like its a rough time...im sorry ...but the poem is awesome...your emotions are strong...


  • Greenemo
    November 5, 2008
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    : ( sounds like its a rough time...im sorry ...but the poem is awesome...your emotions are strong...