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Love

Two sleepy eyes,
a button nose.
Ten tiny fingers
ten perfect toes.

Eternally bound
to me, to mine.
A treasure born
at Christmas time.

Loved forever
from this day.
Abandoned never
come what may.

Love unconditioned,
love without end.
From this day
forever my friend.

A treasure found,
perfection defined.
Delightfully small
and proudly mine.

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  • thepoetssoul
    November 8, 2008

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    A beautiful entry so so soft and lovely.
    Their's not much more perfect than a new born
    Thanks for the entry.
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony