I spread like the glide
of a bed sheet
to be felt
collecting mementos
of the willing
only wanting the same
One woman
a bi sexual fad
I never loved
listless--
callous affection
One woman
I loved amongst
the simple needs
only her heart encrusted
with abysmal mischance
and hapless views--
so wasted
One woman of tragic beauty
so desired within lust
but offered nothing
a mere design
disposable after one use
One woman
I try so hard to love
but my heart has filled
so now
she feels the emptiness
of a full womb
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she feels the emptiness
of a full womb
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This is a great entry you have entered.
Very thought provoking images indeed.
Thanks for the entry.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Confused
Exactly how does one feel the emptiness of a full womb? I need clarification. I don't get it, you had me up until that one part. Maybe I'm over analyzing, but I feel like it should have been different. That last part doesn't describe the woman like the other three did, It's about you and how she may feel. Which leads me back to my original question, How does one feel the emptiness of a full womb?
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Very powerful thoughts here... thanks for penning them.
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Hmmm.....powerful. Thoughts of sadness....and even tho in the end a thought of a possible happiness, still no sign of joy. Personal?
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this is friggin brilliant !!!! i loved every last word of it ... truth and talent go hand in hand here ... GREAT PIECE!!!
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thanks so much for the nice comment, and for taking the time to even read it. means a lot! much love and respect to you
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