I
give you some moment,
"to breathe
to see more
to live more..."
and that's what you said
The
moments that we're apart,
"I wouldn't care,
wouldn't feel a thing,
wouldn't remember you..."
and that's me talking to myself.
An invitation
from you-
I need you
miss you
and long for you...
-who said that?
"I'm not asking
for your comeback
for your approval
for you."
-you said it again.
-Stop! I don't need anything anymore...
especially when that's you -
-it's me who's talking
let it be?
Give me some space,
"to breathe more
to see more
to live more
without you
- yes I'm talking now...
Author notes
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words are the only things that can hurt me."-WB
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Comments
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ditto with Ms Chef W.B.
this is very very good. I have penchant for pensive thoughts...that talking to myself part
Sulat pa...
Anna Lee
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ooo very very good i like this interpetion of the quote. wonderful workmen ship yay
~~~~Chef W.B.
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