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Eisteddfod

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With the sunrise they came

in flowing white robes

otherworldly bards

minstrels and the like

 

to gather

in the hidden place, carved

by the ancients

whose pervading spirits

awaited in rays of light

with open arms

 

Oh, let the drums beat loudly

to stir regents and royalty

of ages past

 

as well as

souls yet bound

to earthly shells

 

"holy be they

and they before them."

 

Let morning

with the clap of mighty trees

greet them all

this ethereal procession

 

and may the elements

and earth be pleased by this

sacred occasion

where merriment be uplifted.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Picture prompt #2

 

Eisteddfod (plural Eisteddfodau)– A Bardic festival and competition of the performing arts, from the Welsh, meaning ‘a session or assembly’. Usually opened with a Druid ceremony.

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  • Amera gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    This is really a great take on the prompt. Using the festival from the old Cardigan Castle itself is absolutly brilliant.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Alyzeh
    November 12, 2008

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    This contest is going to be one difficult one to judge! Your wordings are perfect for the picture! This is an excellent write! Great work!


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 10, 2008

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    This is saturated in the mystical without a bit
    of heaviness. I like how you touch on the merriment and pleasure of gathering and rejoicing at the wisdom (rays of light) touching them upon sacred ground. Blue


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Wow Stunning write hun.. I don't think anyone could capture that picture more perfectly than this! I'll be avoiding this contest now lol


  • nevadapoet
    November 1, 2008

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    love the mystery that flows from your words...hidden place to worship felt witin this amazing write. Nicely done.
    Shelly


  • Leonura
    November 1, 2008

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    such writin' brought to life with simple words, yet there is such power. truly a beautiful write, a chara.


  • aeolia
    October 31, 2008

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    "Oh, let the drums beat loudly
    to stir regents and royalty
    of ages past"
    This describes it perfectly. Your poem makes me so happy, though it would be great to read something like this in Welsh! Oh well.


  • Victory Gin silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    It seems sensible to praise merriment over strife. I suppose in certain cultures being detached from one's environment wasn't a possibility. The careful observation, or mindfulness, of one's surroundings must have endowed them with a clearer picture of reality. If you know what the truth is life is not so stressful; when party time comes you party your ass off and remember what is deserving of reverence.


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    you know.. ihave heard that word before but never took the time to look up what it is or means?
    and now i know!
    great poem to go with the very cool photo!


  • Nature Song silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    Secrets past of lore and myth. A hidden, yet sacred place to worship for those worthy. Passed down for many generations. What an awesome write! ~Sie

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