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storm chaser

 

 

 

 

 

She was like a fluffy white cloud.
On a bad day she spat lightning,
I was never grounded, until she
drifted way, that bought down to
  earth

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  • Trisha W
    November 3, 2008
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    short but sweet

    thank you for sharing and good luck!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This was a realy good piece but for a change instead of people being over the word count, you are under it!! Best to you in the contest