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Truth of things





In all truth of things
a truth caressed in twilight

when even the restless
slip on spilled calm

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replaced by lower
price tags

and value substituted
for counterfeit morality

because even the sky
has its price

Author notes

Prompt: stars still fall
30-40 words (used 39 words)

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    I love that last line, even the sky has a price. You did a beautiful job of this. Best to you in the contest


  • righteousme
    November 1, 2008

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    because even the sky
    has its price ...

    i couldnt agree more!!! good luck in the contest!!!