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Autumn

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Autumn -
ashes beckon
the wind
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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    the idea of the ashes calling, a spiritual idea there very strong...PK


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    Absolutely beautiful haiku!


    • haikumonk gold member
      October 31, 2008
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      Thanks so much. Tried a slightly different style.... I'm happy with it... at least today! lol


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    October 31, 2008

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    An excellent haiku! The resonance is powerful. I like the alliteration too.

    Charishma

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