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The Beach House and Joy

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The moment that I’m thinking of I know I’ll not forget.

It happened on a summer’s eve, quite commonplace and yet,

I’ve never felt that way before, and surely never since,

The feelings that coursed through my heart most surely did convince

This father and this husband that, of all men then alive,

Was fortunate beyond his dreams and nothing could deprive

Him of that joy that filled his soul and made him swell with pride,

For sitting on the cottage steps were daughters and his bride.

‘twas in the early summertime, we’d gotten there at three.

The bags unpacked and dinner done, I went outside to see

The sunset and the golden glow that spread across the sky,

And then my eyes filled up with tears, so let me tell you why.

The dusk of ev’ning spread across the ocean and the sand,

The cottage opened, clothes unpacked, I thought I’d try my hand

At counting waves out on the porch beneath a near-full moon,

Unaware of what I’d find right there above the dune.

For on the graying wooden steps and bathed in moonlight’s glow

Were sights and sounds I’ll not forget and made this fellow know

That he was blessed beyond compare and tears filled up his eyes,

As laughter and their voices spread and filled the air and skies.

Pressed close together on the stairs they giggled o’er and o’er.

I watched and listened to those sounds, mixed with the ocean’s roar.

I thought my heart would burst with pride for surely there was none

As lucky as this simple man who seemed a chosen one.

I couldn’t hold the tears that came, and didn’t even try,

For they were tears of wondrous joy and no one could deny

That standing there unseen by them was someone who now knew

Blessings that were heaven sent, Sheli, Kirb, Diane and Sue.

Author notes

This was written about a night at our beach house several years ago. I walked out of the beach house and my three daughters and wife were sitting on the narrow steps all scrunched together and they were talking and laughing and giggling. It made me realize in that instant that I was about the luckiest guy in the world to have those wonderful ladies around me. It was a Kodak moment and that's why I chose x Gemini x's option.

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  • x Gemini x
    November 25, 2008
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    Forgive me for such a late review!

    This is exactly what I was looking for. You had nearly perfect flow and rhythm, and your vocabulary was stimulating. The memory was vivid enough for me to feel like I was watching an old homevideo.

    I wish I have something like that one day.

    Thank you, it was a pleasurable read.

    ~ Gem

  • Veronica Leigh
    October 31, 2008

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    Lovely! I remember when you told me this story a while ago. Really really sweet and you did a great job turning it into a poem.


  • Legend silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    Excellent

    Paul this is truly a beautiful poem That most of i can relate to ,Having three wonderful daughters who when my dear wife was alive used to do things like yours Sitting giggling and whispering It is such a unexplainable feeling knowing that they are part of your world. And that they enrich it so just by being in it
    Excellent in every way
    A joy to know that another has sampled the joys of parenthood as myself