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I am the Coward [DRAFT]

I sat outside
Gazing at the stars at 2am
Freezing weather biting my toes
But I didn't care,
I kinda wanted to be alone

I laid for an hour
Watched a meteor shower
The cold still eating away at me
But I didn't care

Secretly wanting her to realise
For her to come and find me
I would of waited for over 3 hours
I wanted her and me to be alone

I sat ouside
Fazing from the cold
But I didn't care

The funny thing is
She found me alone
I couldn't tell her
How I felt
Because
I am the coward of
I love you


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