Beneath a burnished moon,
passion awaits.
Upon a feathered pallet,
our love we'll consummate.
No longer living separate,
we will unite as one.
Vowing love's promise,
never to be undone.
Author notes
picture prompt from photobucket.com
A contest entry
- Fantasy PIF by carole21.
900 points, ended November 13, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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never to be undone..and what else is required..just nothing..if it is the state of minds..if it is the state of the hearts..wonderful work..
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What a beautiful romantic poem for this picture prompt. The imagery is wonderful. Congrats on the silver cup.
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As always.. you have presented a beautiful poem thus justifying a perfect picture
Congratulations Sam..
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Congratulations on the silver, I love the softness of your poem, very fitting for the prompt...Sue
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This is sweet and simple it is not too long either and is very nice to read. I like the words that you chose to write this. It had a very sweet flow because of the way you used the words and the correct grammar all of which helps when you write a poem.
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Very sweet and loving... a nice flow and rhyme. Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Lovely verse! Could be a placard placed in a honeymoon suite.
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good job . . thanks for the contest entry
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Dear Sam, very beautiful my friend.
A lovely take on the picture.
Hope you are well sweetheart.
Love Joan
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Sam,
I like the idea that you came up with from this picture. It's a lovely thought and a beautiful image you give the reader.
Beautiful,
Criss -
Beautifully written
Wonderful ebb an flow the words rich and wondrous.
This is such a sweet representation of a wondrous time.
Well done;
*Go with God* my friend
Valerie
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